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Industrial Antipaladin Pedigri
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
Poland
"I am thy empire", spectrally whispers the Antipaladin as you approach him, what means in a language long dormant: "Please, tell me, how may I be of service?"

If you happen to seek the ageless counsel of an astrologer, the intuitive wisdom of a numerologist, or a soothing embrace for your spirit and mind, then you have come to the right place, and your pouch won't miss a gold piece, for I am the guardian seeking redemption by leading you through oceans of thorned labirynths until you find your way in life. Fear not, for I always leave paths to choose from instead of showing you the only way...

I am forever thyne.

Current Residence: "I am forever thyne".
deviantWEAR sizing preference: Medium
Print preference: Glossy poster
Favourite genre of music: Industrial, Industrial/Electronica, EBM, Industrial-Metal, Power metal, Celtic, Neo-Classical, Anime
Favourite photographer: Well, I like the ancient ones:D
Favourite style of art: Abstract, fantasy, surreal, dark, photomanips, traditional, anime, animations, landscape photos
Operating System: Windows XPerienced.
MP3 player of choice: Winamp rocks the docks
Shell of choice: Shell? A toilet shell? A shotguns shell? If so, I like FN P90 TR and FN Minimi shells...
Wallpaper of choice: Konoko, Jade, Nightelves, Cats, Sunsets, Sunrises, Forest and Waterscapes... I collect wallpapers...
Skin of choice: Tanned...
Favourite cartoon character: SWAT Kats: The Radical Squadron, Soul Hunter, Slayers, Record of Loddoss War etc.
Personal Quote: Reality is only for people without imagination
Interests
I did a little video where I tried to synch Disney's Frozen's Let it Go scene with the popular Get Jinxed song from League of Legends and tie it with its story.
I hope you'll like it.



I'm struggling to find time to get back into doing art, but I'm definitely going to do it. And I want to combine it with making videos.

Anyway, how have you been? I hope you're doing great.

Best wishes.

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Lily-Lucid Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  New member  Writer
Thanks for the feedback! I'll get to working on it as soon as I can! Maybe I'll notify when I've finished working on it :D
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Pedigri Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
Thanks for being open to feedback. That's not always the case, especially with people who'd rather push for publishing their work as it is instead of contemplating the feedback, because it hurts their ego or it seems like too much work. Glad you don't seem like one of those people.
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Lily-Lucid Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  New member  Writer
I mean, yeah, I don't want to rush and publish something that isn't good and people are gonna get annoyed reading.
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TEANO Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Won't be able to do much today due to an exam tomorrow, I'll likely finish editing tomorrow.
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Pedigri Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. See you after the exam:)
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TEANO Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
Sorry for the late reply, I will read the chapter you sent me tomorrow. Who knows, maybe my feedback will be different. 
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TEANO Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Thanks for your feedback, I will get to editing as soon as I can, right now schoolwork has managed to pile up worse than it ever has before though, and apart from my time it's also taking the energy I need to write. Not the inspiration though, so at least that's a good thing.

A week or two ago I read a part of 'Destiny' to my class and sent an edited version to my English teacher: it's been edited rather extensively and I dare say it's been improved. 
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Pedigri Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I see. No problem.

Wow, that must've taken confidence in your work.
What kind of changes were those? Grammatical ones or story-related?
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TEANO Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Confidence is the key to success ;) He told me 'it's a nice text', so that's nice. Didn't get as much feedback as I wanted from my colleagues though, but oh well. Common edits, mostly fixing of unnatural sounding sentences, but also, and most notably, some dialogue changes: Irewyth tells a little bit more about her past in Dalaran, about her escape and Arthas' attack, she further explains her reasoning for thinking why humans can't forge a proper legacy. It's a driving force behind her character so I felt I had to explain it a little more thoroughly. The better I get at English, the more I seem to notice those. Which is a good thing, don't get me wrong.
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Pedigri Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, your colleagues either kept taste-based opinions to themselves or didn't really know much about creative writing, so...;)

Hmm, sounds like an interesting change, but I'll have to see if it didn't prolong her dialogue too much. That would be weird if she talked for 30 minutes of real time or if it took these 30 minutes for someone to join the party so they can set off:)

I know full well that the more words and sentence structures you know, the more you can express in this language.
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